Tuesday, September 18, 2012

Best Hook Ever... "Hey Bea!"


In the comments section, leave your best "hook" from the "Little Red Riding/Fish Hooks" lesson.  You can comment on others' hooks if you like them, too! DO NOT JUST TELL ME WHICH TYPE OF "HOOK" YOU LIKE... I want to see what you've written!   If you've forgotten how to post, click on the "How to Blog" tab above for a reminder of what to do and how to do it! 

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  1. HEY YOU GUYS! You actually have to post the hook that you wrote, not just tell me which type of hook you like the best! Post what you wrote for your "favorite elementary school memory! REDO! If you need help, look at the posts on the 7th hour English's blog. They're on the right track!

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  2. I like the hook that starts with a question! Like I did , Who thought Morgan would actually through the grape? And hit his face!!

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  3. The wind was making my eyes water. I was afraid to fall even though the assured me I wouldn't. I just couldn't convince myself. I close my eyes and take the first step. My feet tangle along with my stomach as I sip under the wire. Let's go back to the begining.

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  4. My favorite was the one with the interesting questions. I said has it been scary to you when looking down 70 feet? Well if you said yes than welcome to the ropes course in Wolfridge.

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  5. It started off terribly wrong.

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  6. Who would have thought the first time I left home for a week could be so wonderful?

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  7. I am the type of girl who would rather hang out with the guys than gossip with the other females in my grade.

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  8. Have you ever stood on a tight rope over 20 feet in the air?

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  9. My favorite hook is the one where you start with a question. Who would of thought eating with the teacher would be so fun?

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  10. My favorite hook is the one that you start with a question. Would you ever thought about animals running around you and your friends.

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  11. My favorite hook is when you start with a question. "Who would think people find doing this fun?"

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  12. my favroite hook is start with a question. would you ever think that animals can snowboard

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  13. My favorite hook is one that starts with a question. what if cars didn't make pollution.

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  14. My favorite hook is the one that starts with an interesting metaphor or simile. The wind was like a push from heaven.

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  15. I wonder if I will be able to keep up with my friends on the snow hill?

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